11.03.2014

A Literary Near-Death-Like Experience: The Final Scenes of Goethe's Faust Part 2

During a recent course I gave on Goethe's Faust, I was impressed by many things in Goethe's masterwork, not the least of which is the remarkable and strange ending to the second half of the tragedy, which has been exercising the pens of critics since it appeared in 1832, the year of the author's death.  For some, it's a completely unexpected and gratuitous ending, much like a deus-ex-machina ending of a play by Seneca or Plautus. For others, Faust gets exactly what he deserves, salvation.  I would like to add my own interpretation, which is somewhat between the two.  First, a little background  information.

Faust is perhaps the most ambiguous of all literary masterworks.  Criticism of Dante's Inferno might range from A to D; criticism of Shakespeare's Hamlet might range a little farther into the alphabet than that.  In other words, critics basically agree; there is not a school of thought, for instance, that considers Hamlet to be a rogue, while another group of scholars considers Hamlet to be a saint. But criticism of Faust entails the entire alphabet--Some critics might have an A view, as it were, while others have a completely opposite Z view.  This is true of no other major work of literature with which I am familiar.

The ending of part two of the tragedy is especially problematic.  I offer in this essay a new angle from which to view the ending, one that goes beyond, as it were, the entire alphabet!  Before we turn to the ending, however, I would like to summarize briefly part one and part two, emphasizing the aspects that make the ending incongruous for some, inevitable for others.

FAUST

Goethe, born in 1749, published the final version of Faust Part 1 in 1808.  There is an earlier version called the Urfaust in which most of the elements of the drama first appeared; it dates from the 1770s when Goethe was in his twenties.  Faust Part Two, as mentioned previously, was published in 1832; Goethe had been working on it for decades, and was still perfecting and adding to it in his eighties.

The story of Faust is well known, so I will be brief.  Faust, the most prominent scholar of his age, is dissatisfied.  He is after Truth, not truths.  He understands that "we are not able to know," which drives him to despair.  Revelation, which guided mankind in the past, is of no use in the post-Kantian pseudo-medieval modern world which Faust inhabits. ("I hear the Gospel, but I lack belief.")  He makes a pact with the devil; if Mephistopheles can enable Faust to experience eternity, even for a moment, the scholar is willing to forfeit his soul. Since trying to find Truth through knowledge has proven to be futile, the devil suggests that the inexperienced Faust might find what he is looking for in the world of sensuality.  Faust's youth is restored; a love potion fills him with desire.  He seduces a young, beautiful innocent girl, Gretchen, who is his social inferior.  As she relates in an immortal poem, Gretchen at the Spinning Wheel, her peace has been destroyed.  Faust gives her a sleeping potion; she is instructed to slip it into her mother's drink, so he can seduce Gretchen at home while the older woman sleeps. She never wakes up.  Gretchen becomes pregnant; Faust abandons her.    Her brother curses her for the shame she has caused and dies in a duel with Faust, who is aided by the devil.  Having gone mad with grief, the poor girl drowns her newborn daughter; she is condemned to death for this crime.  Faust, spirited to the prison by Mephistopheles, attempts to save her, but it is too late.

The Faust of Part One is a rogue.  In his striving for Truth, he is completely amoral. ("I have neither scruples nor (self) doubts, and do not fear hell or the devil."  A classic example of a noble end supposedly  justifying ignoble means. The Faust of Part Two continues his ceaseless striving, but with a major difference: in the first part, Faust is responsible for the deaths of four members of one family; in part two Faust seeks and obtains enormous political power and affects--and destroys--many lives.  With the devil's help, he mercilessly decimates the army of one who has declared himself emperor, since the current one is an unjust fop.  Prior to the devil's intervention, the alternative and presumably more just emperor's side was winning.  As a reward for his savage victory, Faust requests and receives from the emperor a coastal area; his life work now is to reclaim huge stretches of land from the sea.  (Perhaps a symbol of his working against nature rather than with it.)  The land reclamation proceeds with the devil's help--it would have been impossible without it.  Faust dies, an old man, before his life work is completed.

THE A AND THE Z OF IT

As mentioned previously, the interpretation of Goethe's work has been quite problematic.  The "A" interpretation asserts that Faust, after committing many misdeeds, sincerely repents and is justified for being  proud of his land-reclamation project which will, in his opinion at least, provide a major benefit to mankind. The "Z' view is that Faust remains a miscreant to the very end.  If the latter case is true, his salvation at the end is gratuitous and completely undeserved.  Let us now briefly discuss the arguments of each side.
The so-called "perfectiblists" assert that Faust attains the height of moral existence, after a life of misdeeds, before his death.  This has been the standard view, and, until relatively recently, had remained largely unchallenged. Alleged proof of this transformation occurs in several sections  at the end of the text. Faust is furious that a loving, elderly couple, Philemon and Baucis,  still live on the coastal area which he has received from the emperor. (Baucis asserts that Faust's project was morally very suspect.  She asserts, correctly that he used slave labor and utilized  "black magic" to  assist him in the construction, which took place mostly at night.) Faust, bent on owning everything on the land he is working on, decides to forcibly evict the couple.  His henchmen, along with Mephistopheles--possibly accomplishing Faust's secret desire--terrorize the couple who die on the spot.  Their property catches fire and burns down. Faust curses their action and washes his hands of it--he insists that he merely demanded their eviction, not their demise.  This has been interpreted by some as genuine repentance.  Later on, immediately before Care (that is, Anxiety, in the form of a woman) blinds the 100 years old Faust, he admits the following (in my rough translation): "I have only desired and accomplished, storming powerfully through my life; previously I was big and tough; now I proceed cautiously with wisdom." In his last monologue, Faust asserts the importance of his legacy and is convinced that "the traces of his life on earth will last forever."

The "Z" critics--and I cast my lot in with them--find no evidence of a great moral awakening; Faust remains immoral--or amoral--to the very end.  He repents about what happened to the elderly couple--but these are merely words and are not followed with any change in behavior.  His assertion that he "only desired and accomplished" does not result in any moral transformation either. His assertion that he now "proceeds cautiously and with wisdom" is more due to the fact that he is 100 years old, rather than due to a moral epiphany.  In his final monologue he is as grandiose and self-centered as ever.  Faust for the "Z" critics is a man  who uses any means whatever to reach his ends. He shows not the slightest concern for his enslaved workers.  He has caused considerable pain and suffering in the first part and a good deal more in the second part.  He is, in this view, a megalomaniac and a scoundrel.  The final two scenes, in which heavenly hosts declare him saved and then transport him to heaven, appear to this group of critics as to be either a parody or an unconvincing deus ex machina ending--albeit without the appearance of a god.  I would like now to present my interpretation, in which Faust remains an unredeemed rogue throughout both parts of the play--and yet, at the end, is worthy of redemption.

FAUST'S TRANSFIGURATION AS A NEAR-DEATH-LIKE EXPERIENCE

Immediately before his final monologue, the blind Faust leaves his palace, pleased by the sounds of workers.  He believes he is hearing sounds of construction on his land-reclamation project: "How the sound of spades delights me/ This is the mass of people indentured to me/ who reconcile earth with earth/ who give no borders to the waves/ and give strict limits to the sea." (lines 15139-15143.) Once again, Faust is deluded--the sounds he hears are from demons digging his grave.  Faust subsequently dies and is placed in the freshly dug grave.  "The terrible jaws of hell" open on stage left.  Mephistopheles is ready to claim Faust's soul according to the terms of the wager. Then something miraculous happens. This "something" as we shall see, has many of the characteristics of a near-death experience.

In the stage directions, Goethe writes that a "Glory above from the right" appears.  This has been translated by David Luke (Oxford University Press) as "A flash of glory from above right."  We are now experiencing the brilliance of the divine light becoming manifest in the world; such epiphanies had often been depicted in medieval art as a vision of a saint, which takes the form of a brilliant apparition above him, as we can see in a rather typical painting of that era by Hans Baldung Grien, (1511).




The heavenly hosts bear glad tidings for Faust's immortal part: "Come in serene flight, ye divine emissaries, animate dust and forgive sins--Reveal friendly hints to all natures, all ye hosts floating above," (lines 11676-11684). The message of the angels is clear: they proclaim that in the divine realm all individuals are completely forgiven, no matter what they have done on earth.  Thus, Faust deserves redemption as much as anyone else. A chorus of angels then strews roses from above, symbols of divine, unconditional love.

Already two major characteristics of a near-death experience have become manifest: a flash of divine light from above and the revelation that all--in this case Faust assumes the role of an Everyman--deserve and receive unconditional love from on high.

Near-death experiences, visions of an afterlife by those in a coma or determined to be clinically dead for a period of time, are remarkably consistent.  This article does not claim, nor does it absolutely deny, that these experiences transcend the psychological; it does, however, assert that NDEs show a remarkable consistency and reflect deep  insights into the human condition. As archetypes of our collective unconscious, their contents illustrate innate, profound patterns of thought and belief.  It is therefore not completely surprising that Goethe, who had a a deep understanding of human nature, ended his great drama with great final truths. (That these truths are expressed in ways consistent with NDEs is, however, quite remarkable.) It is quite possible--even likely-- that Goethe believed that what happened to the fictive Faust after his fictive death could happen to real, flesh and blood people after death. (It has been documented that Goethe thought that death is not final.)

Pim van Lommel, a Dutch cardiologist, has done much research regarding NDEs.  Examples of his research have appeared in many prestigious journals, including The Lancet.  He is the author of the well-received "Consciousness Beyond Life; the Science of the Near-Death Experience", which I have reviewed. To his surprise, he discovered that about 20% of 62 of his patients who suffered clinical death had an NDE.  All of the patients had cardiac arrests and had come under his care for this reason.  We will use his book, and especially Moody's list of typical Near-Death Experiences, on which van Lommel elaborates, as a reference as we discuss Faust's final moments. (Moody, the author of the 1975 Life After Life is a seminal figure in the field of NDEs.)

I have found five aspects of a NDE that apply to Faust.  We have already briefly mentioned two; I will now proceed to discuss these two in more detail along with the three other aspects.

1. "The Perception of a Brilliant Light or a Being of Light"

We have already seen that a flash of light appears after Faust's death radiating from a whole host of beings of light.  Although they initially appear above the stage on the right, they and their light soon permeate the whole stage.

2. Unconditional Love

On page 284 of his book, van Lommel writes, "During a NDE, the encounter with 'the light' is felt to be the most intense and most essential part of the experience.  This encounter is always accompanied by an overwhelming sense of unconditional love and acceptance.  At this point NDErs feel completely enveloped by the enlightening and all-encompassing consciousness."

We have already mentioned corroboration of this factor in the play's final two scenes.  The roses strewn by the celestial beings represent unconditional love; the angels declare that forgiveness of sins applies to "Allen Naturen" that is, to everybody. The angels (lines 11800-11805) leave no doubt that love and forgiveness are always finally victorious: "Loving flames, reveal clarity/So that Truth can heal/Those who condemn themselves/So that they cheerfully/Leave evil behind/In order to blessedly join/ Universal unity."  What could be clearer?  Faust had "condemned himself" throughout his entire life by thinking only about himself and by acting extremely selfishly throughout.  (Faust here represents all humanity; every religion has its version of "we have all gone astray.") It is important to note that the angels proclaim as a general rule that truth will heal those who condemn themselves by committing evil.

Critics, even those in the so-called "A" group who assert that Faust has genuinely repented, have always found Faust's redemption to be problematic.  As one might expect, the "Z" critics, who assert that Faust remains a scoundrel to the very end, find the ending offensive and completely unjustified. It makes no sense to them.  It turns conventional (that is, earthly) morality on its head.  But that's precisely the point.  Let us turn to an assertion of Zen Buddhism for clarification here.  Zen philosophy asserts that deep down we are all enlightened. No exceptions. There is, as it were, an indestructible diamond inside everyone.  Our ignorant and evil deeds cover up the diamond with mud.  In some individuals, the layer of mud is very thick, in others, less so.  Enlightenment--represented by the universal truths manifested by the divine beings after Faust's death--washes the mud  away, no matter how thick it had become.  The diamond is then visible, although  it may still need further cleansing, as we shall see in Faust's case.  The manifestation of this diamond--which some can achieve in life--is redemption.  In this interpretation, one's true self, the diamond, is always there, no matter how concealed.  Uncovering this eternal diamond is inevitable; mud, the superficial layer, is not immortal and is eventually washed away--after death, or sometimes, (rarely) before.  In this interpretation, therefore, Faust's redemption isn't problematic at all. That he possessed an internal diamond in no way justifies the thick layers of mud Faust accumulated in his lifetime.

One might object here that in a NDE the person is conscious--albeit with a higher consciousness--throughout.  At the end of the tragedy, Faust is really dead; there is no indication that he is conscious of his redemption.  Or is there? We will now assert, with evidence presented by the next three points, that Faust might indeed aware of what is going on.

3.  The Out Of Body Experience

A bodiless consciousness, often observing the inert body of the observer, is a hallmark of NDEs. "During an out-of-body experience," Dr, van Lommel writes, "people have verifiable perceptions from a position outside and above the lifeless body" (page 19).  How does this apply to Faust?

In my interpretation, Faust has left his inert body; his consciousness has now left the stage to become, as it were, part of the audience.  From his new vantage point, Faust is observing everything.  We will give further evidence to support this view a little later.

A critic, J.M van der Lamm, an ardent member of  the "Z" group, finds Faust's redemption to be completely unacceptable. He asserts that "Faust has nothing to say or do in the last scene.  He has neither power nor authority, but rests in the arms of attending angels.  They carry him, or that which remains of him and is immortal,...providing the motion of which he himself is now incapable.  The great man of action is now the man of inaction," (Seeking Meaning for Goethe's Faust, Continuum International Publishing Group, London, 2007, page 151). What is gratuitous for him is inevitable for me: the mud has been washed away.  I would refer Mr. van der Lamm to the quote of Goethe on the the very first page of his book: Wir sind Originale weil wir nichts wissen--that is, "We are individuals because we know nothing."  When the truth is revealed, the mud disappears and the diamond is manifest.  He is not now "a man of inaction"--he has become  part of a universal consciousness on its way home. "The great man of (destructive) action" is now, thankfully, dead.  The diamond, the essential nature of everyone and in everyone, shines on.



In a famous painting of Hieronymous Bosch, (1450-1516), "Visions of the Afterlife" several aspects of a NDE experience are depicted, such as the light, the ascent, the tunnel.  (Van Lommel found that the "tunnel experience" was present in only 21% of his cases, however.)

4. "Encounters with Spiritual Beings And/Or With the Deceased"

Whenever a NDEer  encounters someone known to him or her, that person, often a relative, is no longer among the living.  Despite all the varied aspects of a NDE, there are no exceptions to this fact.  I find this to be astounding.  If we were dealing with usual dreams here, one would expect that an NDEer,  entering, say, the tunnel, would see at least occasionally see close family members on the earthly side, begging him not to depart.  This is never the case.  There are no good-byes at the beginning of the tunnel.

In the final scene of Faust, there is no one among the living who witnesses Faust's apotheosis.  Even Mephistopheles, who defined himself in the first part as "a part of that power"--has disappeared, since the deepest reality does not include his, at best, partial, subjective, truths.  The only encounter Faust with someone known to him on earth is with "una poenitentium, formerly known as Gretchen" who rejoices as Faust's returns to her. Gretchen asserts: "Surrounded by the noble chorus of spiritual beings/The new arrival is scarcely conscious of fresh life..See how he is leaving behind the bonds of earth of the old shell.. .Give me permission to instruct him;/ The new day is blinding him still." This request is granted by the Mater Gloriosa, the Virgin in her Glory, as opposed to the statue of the "Mater Dolorosa" of the first act, depicted as mourning the crucifixion of her Son.

As stated before, the diamond is now apparent, but still has traces of mud on its surface and in need of further cleansing.  Gretchen will restore it to its original brilliance by teaching Faust something that was so very lacking in his earthly existence, love.

5. Universal and Culturally Bound Aspects

As mentioned earlier, unconditional love is experienced in virtually all NDEs.  This is also astounding.  One would expect that Westerners, whose religions assert that the good will be rewarded and the bad be punished in the afterlife, would not always encounter absolute acceptance in their NDEs.  There is almost never any aspect of judgement in a NDE.  The myth of Christ welcoming those on His right to heaven and condemning those on the left to hell proves to be just that, a myth; it dies with the body of the NDEer.  It is truly noteworthy that an important aspect of the teaching of the three Abrahamic religions, namely, some form of judgement, is completely absent in the dying minds of NDErs who practiced one of these religions during life.

Other aspects of NDEs are not universal.  NDErs often interpret the beings they encounter according to the religious symbolism they had been familiar with in life.  Christians often see Jesus; Jews, Hindus, etc. don't. This for me provides evidence that Faust is having a NDE-like experience.  Many of the spiritual beings he encounters have their origin in Christian, specifically Catholic, mythology.  This is the faith in which Faust grew up. (I imagine that by the time Faust is perfected, the cultural myths will have abated, leaving nothing but everything, the diamond of universal consciousness.)

In Part 1 of Faust, Faust contemplates suicide because he despairs of ever reaching universal knowledge.  It is Easter morning and he hears the joyous sounds of Christians celebrating the Resurrection.  Even though he does not believe that the Resurrection ever occurred, he is swept away with joy.  It reminds him of the delights Easter provided in his childhood.  The celebrations invade his being and turns him away from suicide.  "Earth has me again", he asserts. Although the Church can never have him again, its symbolism remains deep inside him. This is, I think, why Catholic mythological figures appear at the end.  It is his NDE; it contains universal truths as seen and imagined according to the cultural tradition in which Faust was raised. The faces might be different, but what's behind them is the same.  I think Goethe, a lapsed Protestant who asserted that he was decidedly not Christian, uses these symbols because they would be familiar to Faust as he reaches the first stage of his transfiguration.  This is consistent with my statement that Faust is now part of the audience, experiencing the afterlife in terms he would understand.

What the angels, having carried "Faust's immortal part" into the higher realm, proclaim in lines 11936-11937 is one of the most famous and most important revelations of the drama: "We are able to redeem those/Who never cease to strive." This is undoubtedly what Faust, now in the audience, as it were, would want to hear.  (It is also undoubtedly what the ever-active Goethe would want to hear as a revelation from on high.)  But the angels that Goethe imagines do not leave it at that; they delve deeper into the essence of things.  The lines are ambiguous; they are a "this side/that side" welcome.  Faust needs to hear something he can relate to, the "this side" aspect for one whom "the new day still blinds."  But it subtly leads Faust beyond, the "that side" aspect of the lines.  The German word for redeem, "erlösen," also means to release, in this case, release from chains.  That type of striving is now over!  In addition, the angels do not proclaim that only the strivers are redeemed; that they can redeem the active does not imply that they can't redeem contemplatives.  As stated previously, they are perfectly capable of redeeming everyone.  (A less driven person might well hear the angels proclaim, "We can redeem (release from all chains) those who were satisfied with what they had."

All earthly striving is now to be transcended and replaced by something deeper which really isn't striving at all.  This view is proclaimed by the Mystical Choir, in the famous last lines of the play, which sums everything up for Faust and for us all: "Everything that is not permanent/Is merely a symbol;/ What cannot be reached/Is reached here;/What can't be described/Is accomplished here/ The eternal-feminine/ pulls us on."  The "eternal-feminine", of which Gretchen was a good example, is the power of love.  Notice that Goethe has this power pull us.  This is reminiscent of NDEers who feel them selves being drawn rapidly into a realm of light.  It is a passive process.  Faust sees his immortal part being taken rather than striving towards ultimate reality. At this point, one no longer has the choice of rambling through space, as it were; the individual satellite has come sufficiently close to be captured by the gravity of the transcendent realm--it will and must land there without any further action of its own. It is a dis-covering, an uncovering of the diamond inside.  Faust is finally learning his lesson, the lesson.  Love, not egotistical striving, is what ushers in eternity. There are many aspects of the drama that apply to humanity as a whole, and this is the most important of all of them.  I think Goethe would agree with me that this is something, better sooner than later, that we will and must learn, too.

Summary

The last two scenes of Faust Part 2 reveal several typical aspects of a NDE, something, to my knowledge, that has never been asserted before.  Whatever a NDE is, it certainly illustrates what a dying mind universally deems to be of the utmost importance.  Although NDE-like experiences have occurred throughout all times and cultures--albeit not with the frequency of today, due to increased awareness of these encounters--there is no evidence that Goethe had any knowledge of this phenomenon.  It is more likely that Goethe, who had profound knowledge of the deepest truths of the human condition, revealed these universal truths at a time for Faust when all earthly vanities are cast away, namely, after death. This after-death revelation is the essence of virtually all NDEs. This is why Goethe's deepest insights have so many characteristics of those who have had transcendent experiences after clinical death; this is why understanding NDEs helps us see Faust's salvation in a new light.  Whether he was aware of it or not, Goethe thus depicted a NDE-like experience in the last two scenes of his great play, perhaps the most beautiful and profound example of such in all literature.

Goethe Essays by Thomas Dorsett

(All are accessible on the internet by googling the title in question along with thomasdorsett, or by accessing my blog, thomasdorsett.blogspot.com)

1. Goethe's Prometheus
2. Wanderers Nachtlied ll
3. Who Never Ate His Bread in Tears
4. Goethe's Wanderers Nachtlied und ein Einfacheres
5. A Fictional NDE-like Experience from Goethe's Faust Part 2
6. An Analysis of Two Schubert/Goethe Lieder

10.31.2014

PRIMUM NON NOCERE! (FIRST OF ALL, DO NO HARM!)

"All happy families are alike; each unhappy family is unhappy in its own way."  This is how Tolstoy begins Anna Karenina, one of the greatest novels of all time.  I am not sure whether that statement is universally true; I am sure, however, that it is universally true that nobody should make families unhappier by separating parents from their children unnecessarily. Keeping families together should be a commonplace; yet the opposite takes place far too commonly to be an exception to what should be a golden rule  I will give an example from our pediatric practice.

Not every parent interacts well with his or her child at our office.  (An example: one mother tried to text someone while I was about to give her frightened four-year-old vaccinations.)  Most, however, are caring; the parents I will now describe were very caring indeed.

They were obviously different.  The man wore the earrings; each had long hair of equal length; none of the socks or shoes matched, etc.  I remember asking them, "Whatever you smoke, do you ever smoke it in front of the kids?" You get the idea.

They were, however,  model parents.  They explained everything I was going to do, and comforted their two little sons admirably.  Their jeans might have been torn, their shoes might have been worn, but no matter--their children were very lucky to have such parents.

I was surprised that they didn't keep the next appointment, since they never missed appointments in the past. The following month, however, the children did come to the clinic--this time accompanied by foster parents.  Both boys looked miserable.  You could see that their world had fallen apart.  They were glum and taciturn, the direct opposite of their usual behavior.  The foster parents informed me that the boys now attended  daycare, since both adults worked.  They were decent people, but not very affectionate; each one sat silently while I examined two equally silent kids.

What had happened?  The foster parents told me that dad and mom had been caught smoking pot and that the children were removed from the home for that reason.  Soon after the visit,  I received a phone call from the mother; she was so very concerned about how the children were doing.  Both parents were in jail.

It is possible that there is more to this story.  Perhaps the parents had been caught selling drugs; the biological mother, however, denied that they had done so.

If their sole crime had been possession of a small amount of pot, it certainly wouldn't have been the first time that a family has been split up without good cause.  America's incarceration rate is the world's highest; 50% of state  inmates and 90% of federal inmates are serving time for non-violent drug-related crimes.  In addition, sentences for the same crime often result in years behind bars in America, in contrast with months behind bars in Europe. Punishment for possession of crack--even small amounts of which are equated with much larger amounts cocaine--is especially unfair and especially hard on the poor and minorities. (African Americans constitute 15% of the general population and 30% of those incarcerated.)

What about the children of those sentenced--sometimes for years--for such "crimes"? The statistics are disheartening. For instance, one in four children of poor African-American parents has had a parent serving time in jail during crucial years of child development.  Inmates are able to provide neither emotional nor economic support for their families; it is a real problem, especially for their children. Nor has mass incarceration made neighborhoods safer; there is, in fact, evidence to the contrary. In addition, too many families are the victims of what one reporter calls "poverty capitalism."  This occurs when local communities depend on fines to balance their budgets and thus tend to ticket people--especially poor people--more than necessary.  Inability to pay these fines and missed court appearances often result in jail time.

Many of those serving time lose precious time raising their children. You don't have to be a pediatrician to know that a child's perception and interpretation of separation can be very different from that of an adult--What seems like a small amount of time to a judge can seem like an eternity to a child; what might damage an adult for years might damage a child for life.

I later found out that the two boys had been placed permanently with their paternal grandmother in Wyoming.  I never heard from them or their parents again.

"Breakin' up is hard to do," is a rock 'n' roll classic that everyone was singing in the 60s.  "Breakin' up families must be exceedingly hard to do"--I doubt there will ever be a hit with that title, but I hope that that title will someday hit home.

Note: Details have been changed to protect the privacy of those involved.

This article appeared on page 7 of the Mid-Atlantic Ethics Committee newsletter, Fall 2014, published by The Law and Health Care Program of the University of Maryland.

10.25.2014

AN ANALYSIS OF TWO SCHUBERT LIEDER

I recently taught a four-week course on Goethe's Faust at the Osher Institute of Towson University. There was so much to cover in so little time!  I wanted to play recordings  and analyze  two Schubert songs with texts by Goethe, but couldn't, due to time constraints.  This essay, however, will do just that.  It is made available for anyone with an interest in music and in literature.

First Lied: Gretchen am Spinnrade (Gretchen at the Spinning Wheel), by Schubert with a Text by Goethe


Let's begin with a few words about the poem.  Gretchen recites (or sings) the words while she spins fiber into yarn at a spinning wheel.  The intensity of her love for Faust has destroyed her ability to live any longer within the confines she had known all her life.  She is young, inexperienced and has fallen, as they say, madly in love.  She has not yet had sex with Faust; he will soon give her a sleeping potion for her mother, so he can seduce her at home.  (Her mother will never wake up.)


The poem is written in Knittelvers; each pair of two lines has four strong beats, with a varying number of syllables occurring before each beat, usually one, two or three.  The very regular beats throughout the poem suggest the constant spinning of the wheel.


The poem is a masterpiece.  I know of no other poem that depicts sexual obsession as eloquently.  Gretchen's entire world has been reduced to one man; there is room for nothing else.  She is losing her grip on reality and she knows it.


Goethe's original version is followed by my translation:


Meine Ruh' ist hin,

Mein Herz ist schwer,
Ich finde sie nimmer
Und nimmermehr.

Wo ich ihn nicht hab

Ist mir das Grab,
Die ganze Welt
Ist mir vergällt.

Mein armer Kopf

Ist mir verrĂĽckt,
Mein armer Sinn 
Ist mir zerstĂĽckt.

Meine Ruh' ist hin,

Mein Herz ist schwer,
Ich finde sie nimmer
Und nimmermehr.





Nach ihm nur schau ich

Zum Fenster hinaus,
Nach ihm nur geh ich
Aus dem Haus.

Sein hoher Gang,

Sine edle Gestalt,
Seines Mundes Lächeln,
Seiner Augen Gewalt,

Und seiner Rede

Zauberfluss,
Sein Händedruck,
Und ach! sein Kuss--

Meine Ruh' ist hin,

Mein Herz ist schwer,
Ich finde sie nimmer
Und nimmermehr.

Mein Busen drängt sich

Nach ihm hin,
Ach, dĂĽrft ich fassen
Und halten ihn,

Und kĂĽssen ihn,

Ganz wie ich wollt,
An seinen KĂĽssen
Vergehen sollt!




Prose translation:

My peace is gone,
My heart is sore,
I'll never have peace,
Again, nevermore.

It's like a grave
When I'm not with him;
The entire world
Is spoiled for me.

My poor head
Is going mad;
My poor mind
Has gone to pieces.

My peace is gone,
My heart is sore,
I'll never have peace
Again, nevermore.

When I look out the window
I'm looking for him;
To find him is the sole reason
I'd leave my house;

His noble gait,
His noble form,
The way he laughs,
The power of his eyes,

And the magical flow
Of his speech--
The touch of his hand,
And ah! his kiss--

My peace is gone,
My heart is sore,
I'll never have peace
Again, nevermore.

My heart is yearning,
Yearning for him--
Oh if I could embrace
And hold onto him

And kiss him
As much as I'd like--
From his kisses
To fade from sight!

Schubert put the poem to music in 1814; it is his Opus 2 and his first successful lied.  He was only sixteen years old at the time!  The song is a miracle.  It depicts Gretchen's distress and sexual obsession brilliantly and poignantly.  What other composer or writer has ever begun his career fully mature at such a young age?  Schubert went on to write many great compositions, some of which equal this one, but none surpassed it.  In comparison, Mozart, the very paradigm of prodigy, only began writing masterpieces in his early twenties.

The accompaniment is ingenious.  Schubert uses a pedal tone and two eighth notes followed by an eighth note rest in the bass to indicate Gretchen's foot on the pedal as it drives the wheel.  The constant spinning of the wheel is beautifully depicted by groups of sixteenth notes, 12 per measure, in the treble.  (The composition, as one might expect, is an a minor key.) The meter is 6/8, which is heard by the ear as two strong beats per measure of 6 sixteenth notes each, thus indicating the monotony of the endless spinning.   

Schubert's music is, however, never monotonous.  He changes the dynamics and the harmony to fit the increasing emotional intensity.  The poem was well suited for the composer.  The constant rhythmic pattern of the piece anchored Schubert's mind, as it were, which had the tendency to float away in any direction his invention decided to take him.  (We will hear an example of this in Prometheus.)

The key very effectively turns--albeit briefly--to major as she thinks of Faust's handsome qualities.  The true touch of genius, however, is the high point of the piece, where Gretchen imagines Faust kissing her.  She is so moved that she takes her foot off the pedal and the spinning stops, to great effect.

After this, the spinning begins with the return of the rondo-like stanza of "My peace is gone."  But it is really gone now--A crescendo begins, evoking increasing emotional distress, which culminates in an almost unbearable intensity with the repetition of "Oh if I could embrace..."


The poem ends at this point, but the music would seem very incomplete if it ended here  Schubert wisely has Gretchen return to her quiet spinning wheel-despair with a repeat of the rondo stanza.


Even if Schubert had been older at the time of this composition, the only proper reaction to this lied is awe


Now let's turn to a recording:








This is a recording of the lied sung by Kiri Te Kanawa, accompanied by Richard Amner on the piano.  I begin with this since it provides the musical notation.  Te Kanawa has a beautiful voice and does indeed sing in a very pleasing manner.  But this text demands a lot more than beautiful singing.  It is a rather bloodless and passionless performance.  The pianist's performance is too perfunctory.  Neither of them understand the text, or at the very least, choose not to understand it.

Now let's turn to another performance of this lied, sung by Renee Fleming accompanied by Christoph Eschenbach:




What a masterful performance by both singer and pianist!  Both performers give a highly emotional rendering--without ever overdoing it--just as the text demands.  You can hear the anxiety in Fleming's voice from the very beginning.  The performance by Eschenbach is every bit as impressive--what a team!  I'm going to emphasize only one thing--the high point of the piece, the G natural above middle C of "Kuss" ("Kiss")  Te Kanawa sings the note beautifully and gently, with an operatic fade in dynamics at the end.  Beautiful, but totally inappropriate, in my opinion.  In contrast, Fleming attacks the G with force, indicating the height of Gretchen's distress--it is quite riveting.  I think Schubert would have loved this performance.

One more recording, Evgeny Kissen playing the Schubert/Liszt piano transcription.  If you want to hear great technique, exquisite phrasing along with intensely emotional playing, Kissen is the pianist for you. His Gretchen begins with a more quiet despair than Fleming's does; the emotion, however, increases and increases--and increases.  He understands the text perfectly; he knows how to build up the emotion until a climax which leaves one almost breathless. What can I say?  This performance makes my hair stand on end, it is that intense.  Kissen performed this when he was about 18!--Now I can understand the sixteen year old Schubert a little better--but only a little!






Note: For those of you who are aficianados of this type of music, I suggest that you listen to Yuja Wang's interpretation of the same piece, the Schubert/Liszt Gretchen am Spinnrade, which is available on YouTube.  In which version does Gretchen's personality become passionately and musically alive?  Although Wang is an accomplished pianist, compared to Kissen, she is just playing notes.

One might want to read my essay,  Wanderers Nachtlied ll (by googling that title and adding Thomasdorsett) in which I compare the Wanderers Nachtlied by Schubert with the lied by Carl Loewe (1796-1869), to the same text, perhaps the most famous of all Goethe's poems.  Although Loewe was much less gifted than Schubert, I contend that he understood this text better and composed a very effective lied.  I also invite you to listen to his Gretchen am Spinnrade, sung by Brigitte Fassbaender, which is available on YouTube.  Notice that Loewe composes "Nach ihm nur geh' ich aus dem Haus" in a major key, as if it were something positive that Gretchen enjoyed doing--the feeling of an all-inclusive obsession is lacking totally. Not so in Schubert's vastly superior version, in which Gretchen's angst is readily apparent.


Second Lied: Prometheus, by Schubert with a Text by Goethe






I have analyzed this poem (google: Thomasdorsett Goethe's Prometheus) and invite readers to refer to it.  Here I will only present the poem and my English translation:





PROMETHEUS


Bedecke deinen Himmel, Zeus,

Mit Wolkendunst
Und ĂĽbe, dem Knaben gleich,
Der Disteln köpft,
An Eichen dich und Bergeshöhn;
Musst mir meine Erde
Doch lassen stehn
Und meine HĂĽtte, die du nicht gebaut,
Und meinen Herd,
Um dessen Glut
Du mich beneidest.

Ich kenne nichts Ärmeres

Unter der Sonn als euch, Götter!
Ihr nähret kümmerlich
Von Opfersteuern
Und Gebetshauch
Eure Majestät
Und darbtet, wären
Nicht Kinder und Bettler
Hoffnungsvolle Toren.

Da ich ein Kind war,

Nicht wusste, wo aus noch ein,
Kehrt ich mein verirrtes Auge
Zur Sonne, als wenn drüber wär
Ein Ohr, zu hören meine Klage,
Ein Herz wie meins,
Sich des Bedrängten zu erbarmen.

Wer half mir

Wider der Titanen Ăśbermut?
Wer rettete vom Tode mich,
Von Sklaverei?
Hast du nicht alles selbst vollendet,
Heilig glĂĽhend Herz?
Und glĂĽhtest jung und gut,
Betrogen, Rettungsdank
Dem Schlafenden da droben?

Ich dich ehren? WofĂĽr?

Hast du die Schmerzen gelindert
Je des Beladenen?
Hast du die Tränen gestillet
Je des Geängsteten?
Hat nicht mich zum Manne geschmiedet
Die allmächtige Zeit
Und das ewige Schicksal,
Meine Herrn und deine?

Wähntest du etwa,

Ich sollte das Leben hassen,
In WĂĽsten fliehen,
Weil nicht alle
Blütenträume reiften?

Hier sitz ich, forme Menschen

Nach meinem Bilde,
Ein Geschlecht, das mir gleich sei,
Zu leiden, zu weinen,
Zu geniessen und zu freuen sich,
Und dein nicht zu achten,
Wie ich!

PROMETHEUS


Conceal your heaven in mist, Zeus,

and practice on oaks and mountaintops
like a little boy who beheads thistles;
my earth, however, you must leave intact,
along with my hut which you didn't build,
and my hearth, the flame of which
provokes your envy.

I know nothing more destitute

under the sun than you gods!
Your majesty wretchedly gets by
with offerings and the breaths of prayer;
you would starve to death
if beggars and children
weren't hopeful fools. 

When I was an ignorant child,

my mistaken eyes turned
to the sun, as if there were
an ear up there to witness
my lament, or a heart like mine
to pity those in distress.

Who helped me when I opposed

the rashness of the Titans?
Who saved me from death and slavery?
Wasn't it you, my holy, fiery heart,
who accomplished it all by yourself?
And once, young and decent, didn't you radiate
thanks of deliverance 
toward Him who sleeps above?

Why should I honor you?

Have you ever 
eased the pain of the troubled?
Have you ever 
stilled the tears of the anguished?
Haven't eternal destiny
--your master and mine--
and all-powerful time
forged the man I've become?

Do you really believe

that I should detest life
and flee to the wilderness
just because many dreams 
bloom and don't survive?

I'm seated here, form human beings

according to my image,
a race that will follow my lead,
to suffer, to cry,
to enjoy, to rejoice,
and to ignore you completely,
just like me.

                 --Translated by Thomas Dorsett

Here is a recording of Schubert's lied, as sung by Dietrich Fischer-Dieskau, accompanied by Dietrich Henschel:










This is not one of Schubert's most successful lieder. It is a very angry poem, and the expression of anger was not one of Schubert's strong points. (He excelled in portraying--exquisitely--both youthful despair and youthful exuberance. Beethoven expressed anger very well, of which the "Ha, Welch' ein Augenblick" aria from Fidelio is an outstanding example.) Schubert's attempt at anger here--a rather pompous beginning along with subsequent tremulos in the bass--is not very convincing. Notice that he leaves anger behind beginning with "Ich kenne nichts Aermeres.." ("I know nothing more destitute"), although he returns to this emotion briefly later on in the lied.

The real problem for Schubert here is the irregular, changing meter of the poem As mentioned earlier, Schubert loved regular meters in poetry, which "anchored" him and gave him the opportunity to balance the regularity with astonishing melodies and harmonies. Schubert is best, of course, at melodies--he was one of the greatest melodists in the history of music--he was much less inclined toward dramatic declaration. The non-melodic declarative sections of this lied do not work very well. (This is not to say that Schubert lacked a sense of drama--Many of his lieder are replete with dramatic intensity e.g., Gretchen am Spinnrade, but he is best at moving the drama along via melody.


This might be C plus Schubert in comparison with the A plus Schubert of the first lied, but it is still Schubert; Prometheus is not without lovely moments. I think the ending is very beautiful, although the emotion expressed is, I think, very different from the intent of the poem. It is not anger with which the lied terminates, but with a religious solemnity, indicating the grandeur and dignity of mankind standing up on its own without an imagined crutch.


As an addendum, I would like to end with a twentieth-century version of this poem by Hugo Wolf. Here melody is subordinated to dramatic intensity; the accompaniment tells the drama, and has an even more important role than the singer--which almost never occurs with Schubert! A fierce anger informs the entire composition (--perhaps a little too much anger?--I leave that up to you!)  Since melody is not emphasized here, Wolf has no problem with the changes of rhythm of this free verse-like poem. Prometheus's anger is palpable throughout. Wolf's version is much more in accord with the poem--perhaps it is more angry than Goethe's poem, but it is a very valid interpretation. 





I have no objection if you still prefer Schubert's version--Grade C Schubert is still Grade A when compared to most composers! I just wanted to point out why his Prometheus is not among his best lieder.


I would like to summarize by stating the obvious: Goethe's poem Gretchen am Spinnrade is a very great poem. Astonishingly, however, a sixteen year old unknown composer wrote a lied to this text that is every bit as great as the poem. What a combination!


Addendum: Goethe Essays by Thomas Dorsett (They can be accessed on the Internet by googling the title along with Thomasdorsett.)

1. Goethe's Prometheus
2. Wanderers Nachtlied ll
3. Who Never Ate His Bread in Tears
4. Goethe's Wanderers Nachtlied und ein Einfacheres
5. A Fictional NDE-like Experience from Goethe's Faust Part 2
6. An Analysis of Two Schubert/Goethe Lieder

10.16.2014

STAND UP FOR YOURSELF

1.
This is indeed a self-help article, but it is not a riff on Bob Marley's immortal song, Stand Up for Your Rights; it is, rather, advice that might keep you exuberantly vertical, instead of eternally horizontal, for many years to come.

Lewis Carroll said it best: Don't just do something, stand there. Research has convincingly shown that, while standing might not be particularly good for bunions and soles, it happens to be very good for bodies and souls.

Here are some of the benefits of standing, according to scientific research:


  •  "Sitting is the new smoking"--Sitting for most of the day is associated with increased rates of obesity, diabetes, high blood pressure, heart disease, cancer and, you guessed it, The Big One.
  •   It has been determined that the negative effects of sitting for most of the day cannot be countered by even a daily trip to the gym.
  •   According to a British expert, the health benefits of standing for three hours every day is equivalent to participating in ten marathons a year!
  •  A recent Swedish study revealed that DNA telomeres remain intact longer in those who sit less.  (Telomeres are the ends of DNA strands the fraying of which is associated with aging.) Reducing sitting protects telomeres even better than exercise.
  • Standing, like exercise, improves mood. (In moderation of course--Cashiers at WalMart, some of whom are not young, are forced to stand for hours.  By the look on their faces and their responses when I asked whether standing up all day is difficult, I realized that a little sitting is not a dangerous thing.) 
  • On German trams there used to be a Schaffner, who punched or sold the tickets, and a Fahrer, who drove the tram.  You guessed it, research proved that Schaffners lived longer.  (These days, it's all automated and on the honor system--that is, you cancel your own ticket at a machine on the tram. Imagine that in New York!) 

The facts are in, and it's good news.   Even better news: you don't have to sweat the big stuff.  No need to suffer while juggling kettlebells or attending boot camp at a local gym.  As Kitty Kallen  sang in a song from the 1950s--yes, I remember it well--Little Things Mean A Lot.  (Kallen is still alive and nearly 100 years old.) Little things, in addition to standing and regular moderate exercise, might include taking the stairs instead of the elevator, parking farther away from the grocery store, etc.  If you work at an office where you sit all day, utilizing a standing desk for part of that time, or simply standing at your desk for a while, is an excellent and increasingly popular way to improve your health. The Aristotelian mean will keep you lean!

2.

I worked at a clinic for several years with a colleague, an internist, who was quite obese.  (Gone are the days of paper medical records; younger physicians will soon find it quaint that there was a time when physicians didn't sit at a computer.)  You didn't have to recognize his handwriting to know whether this doctor had entered something in a patient's chart; the inevitable cheese doodle stains on the page were enough to reveal whose fat fingers had manned the pen. Yes, he was quite obese, and yes, he lectured his patients about the benefits of exercise, good nutrition and the maintenance of  a healthy weight.  When a patient's eyes revealed the patient's thought--namely, how dare a big blimp advise a little blimp to skimp?-- he always replied, "Do as I say, not as I do."

That is not my philosophy.

I will finish this little heuristic article by revealing some of the ways I have incorporated standing up for myself.  (What works for me might work for you.)


  • I've bought a portable podium; I stand before it and do at least an hour's worth of reading and writing every day.  (In preparation for lectures I recently gave, I put my podium in my yard and lectured to the birds.  I was encouraged by the many tweets I received.)
  •  I watch about 4 or 5 hours of TV per week.  (While standing, of course.)  My wife, Nirmala, sits  while I stand, which is fine--she gets at least three hours a day of standing at her office.
  •  I walk a lot--to the bank, to the store, etc.  I notice that most people drive--even for a short distance.  (Recently, after I had escorted a woman to her car after a night of dancing, she offered to drive me back to the club.  She had parked across the street!)

The best friend I ever had, Walter Wilczewski, died a little over thirty-eight years ago--as I wrote in a poem, he was the same age as Schubert was at the time of his death--only 31, alas!  My friend died of multiple congenital aneurysms in his brain, standing would have done him absolutely no good.  One day, he told me that he had begun a poem.  The first line--Nirmala and I still recall it well--was, "I ate my breakfast standing up."  Walter was sometimes ahead of his time, albeit in strange ways.  I'm sure my he would be pleased to know that I am following his advice, albeit in my own, less odd way: in order to have a good time, I will continue to eat my meals while sitting; in order to have more time to be good, however, I will also continue to feast my eyes while I stand.

Addendum 10/18/2014

Last night while standing during a televised broadcast of Porgy and Bess, I coined a word (during the intermission) which expresses my ongoing enthusiasm for standing. It is stehtoll, which may be translated as "mad about standing."  (In German it is perfectly permissible to coin new words, usually consisting of two or more common words:  "Steh, " as a word meaning "stand" is used in such combinations as "Stehlampe," meaning a "standing lamp"  or "Stehpult" meaning a "standing desk." Toll means "crazy"--or, among other things, "wildly enthusiastic.")  I have become quite stehtoll, I admit. it.  One of the refreshing benefits of my Stehtollheit is that I now sleep entirely through the night--I had often been waking up four hours after retiring.  I thought some of you with sleep problems might try becoming stehtoll--Standing for at least three hours a day is ideal. If you do try it, I'd appreciate hearing from you in the comment box.